Eldanar’s Chosen Chapter 171

Brett watched as Josh leaned his head back against the cool stone wall and let out a shuddering breath. He heard Josh murmur, "Well, let's get to it," before the big man’s eyes slid shut.

Almost immediately, Josh’s body seized. Brett watched in a mix of awe and mild horror as his friend gasped, his muscles physically swelling beneath his ruined armour as he dumped his unallocated stat points. It was a visceral reminder of what Tier 3 meant. They were fundamentally altering their biology now.

Taking a deep breath of the smoke-tinged air, Brett crossed his legs, settled his hands on his knees, and closed his own eyes. The sounds of the triage centre and the distant groans of the wounded faded away, replaced by the cool, infinitely deep blue expanse of his system interface.

[Name: Brett | Level: 25 | Unallocated Stat Points Available]

The pool of points sitting in his interface was staggering. He had jumped from level 21 to 25 in the crucible of that courtyard, and the sheer volume of potential energy in his system made his heart race.

Unlike Josh, Brett didn't need to overthink his stat distribution. He was a mage. His lifeblood was his mana pool and his mind. With a swift, practised mental command, he took the vast majority of his points and flooded them directly into Intelligence and Wisdom.

The impact was entirely cerebral, but no less intense than Josh’s physical transformation. Brett’s head snapped back in the real world, his jaw clenching as a blinding white light erupted behind his eyelids. It felt as though the physical confines of his skull were expanding. His thoughts accelerated, sharpening to a razor’s edge. The world around him, even with his eyes closed, mapped itself perfectly in his mind's eye. Simultaneously, deep within his chest, his mana core roared to life. What had once felt like a steady, burning hearth fire suddenly expanded into a raging, oceanic inferno. The sheer density of his new mana pool made him feel like he was vibrating.

But a massive mana pool was useless if a single stray arrow could kill him. He took a measured chunk of the remaining points and drove them into Constitution.

A wave of soothing, dense warmth washed through his organs and bones. It wasn't the heavy, metallic density that Josh had undoubtedly chosen, but rather a toughening of his internal architecture. His flesh felt more resilient, his cardiovascular system fortified, capable of withstanding the immense internal heat his own magic generated without cooking him from the inside out.

Finally, with the last small handful of points, he tipped them into Dexterity. A jolt of sudden agility snapped through his tendons. He wasn't a fighter, but speed of movement meant speed of dodging, and in his line of work, staying out of reach was paramount.

As the last point was spent, the blue interface dissolved, replaced by a radiant, pulsing gold window that commanded his absolute focus.

[Milestone Reached: Level 25 - Tier 3 Class Evolution Available.][Your previous class: Flame Elementalist, has reached its maximum threshold. Based on your actions, achievements, and combat style, the System has generated three potential evolutionary paths. Please select your Tier 3 Class carefully. This choice is permanent.]

Brett’s breath hitched. Back at level 10, choosing Flame Elementalist and later unlocking the Aspect of Primal Flame had changed everything. It had stripped away his access to other elemental spells, locking him entirely into the path of fire, but in exchange, it had made his flames devastatingly potent. Now, it was time to reap the rewards of that sacrifice.

Three glowing obelisks of text materialised in his mind.

[Option 1: Grand Omnisage]The path of balance. You have realised the limitations of restricting yourself to a single element. This class restores your standard spell list, granting you access to water, earth, and wind magic alongside your fire. You gain a massive boost to your mana pool and unlock the [Elemental Weave] ability, allowing you to merge different elemental spells on the fly for versatile effects. Warning: Selecting this class will permanently remove the [Aspect of Primal Flame] skill, returning your fire magic to standard potency.

Brett scoffed internally. Absolutely not. The Aspect of Primal Flame was his defining feature. Returning to a jack-of-all-trades mage sounded appealing for utility, but in the heat of battle against a tide of monsters, utility didn't kill hordes; overwhelming firepower did. He bypassed it instantly.

He looked at the second option.

[Option 2: Hellfire Channeler]The path of self-destruction. You double down on the Aspect of Primal Flame, turning your body into a living crucible. Your fire spells deal 40% more damage and inflict [Searing Agony], burning through enemy resistances. Grants the [Blood-Fuelled Embers] skill, allowing you to cast spells using your own health when your mana is depleted. A volatile, highly destructive artillery mage.

Brett grimaced. It was tempting, but trading health for mana was a fool's game in drawn-out sieges. He liked his blood exactly where it was.

He turned to the final obelisk. It pulsed with a terrifying, jagged crimson light, radiating a heat that Brett could actually feel against his consciousness.

[Option 3: Primordial Cinder-Lord] You do not just command the flame; you are bound to it. This evolution completely fuses the [Aspect of Primal Flame] into your soul. You permanently lose the ability to cast any non-fire magic, but your flames transcend standard elemental laws. Your fire now carries the [Living Conflagration] property, allowing your spells to spread and seek out targets organically. Furthermore, your mana core becomes a primordial forge. Your fire magic ignores 50% of all enemy fire resistance and burns hot enough to melt standard magical shielding.

Brett stared at the crimson text, a slow, feral smile spreading across his face. It doubled down on everything that made him dangerous. It embraced the restriction and turned it into an overwhelming advantage. Living, seeking fire that melted through enemy resistances? It was exactly what he needed.

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"Burn it all," Brett whispered.

He mentally reached out and selected [Primordial Cinder-Lord].

[Class Selected: Primordial Cinder-Lord. Integrating Class Physiology... Brace yourself.]

The change was violently abrupt.

A swirling vortex of shifting, jagged crimson energy erupted from his skin in the real world, the heat so intense it singed the dust in the air around him. Brett’s back arched, his eyes squeezing shut tightly as a blistering, unimaginable heat surged through his veins. It wasn't hurting him, but it was fundamentally altering his biology.

He could feel his mana channels—the invisible veins that carried magic through his body—literally scorching. They sizzled and blackened, expanding under the pressure, turning from fragile magical pathways into robust, hardened conduits built specifically to handle the sheer, unadulterated fury of primordial fire. His blood felt like liquid magma, heavy and thrumming with power.

On the outside, the transformation was just as stark. The bright blonde of his hair began to singe and pale, the pigment literally burning away until the strands were left a stark, ashen silver-grey, like the remnants of a spent fire. Faint, intricate lines of glowing orange tracked beneath his flesh for a few moments, mapping his new, scorched mana channels before settling deep within.

[Class Evolution Complete. Generating Skill Advancements based on new Class Affinity.]

Brett let out a long, shaky breath that tasted of ash. He dove back into the interface as the system ruthlessly audited his skills.

[Skill Evolution Available: Arcane Focus]Your newly forged mana veins burn too hot for standard wooden or crystal focuses. Wielding a standard staff will cause it to incinerate in your hands. To progress, you must adapt.[Skill Upgraded: Scorched Veins]You become the focus. Your severely burnt and adapted mana channels allow flames to travel through your body instantaneously. Casting fire magic using your bare hands now reduces casting time by 40% and increases spell velocity by 30%. You permanently lose the ability to gain stat bonuses from staves or wands.

Brett grinned. He hadn't been using a staff much lately anyway; getting his hands dirty felt far more natural. This evolution turned his body into a weapon.

[Skill Evolution Available: Ignition Veil]Your basic defensive heat-haze is insufficient for a Cinder-Lord.[Skill Upgraded: Mantle of the Immolator]Active: You encapsulate yourself in a roaring sphere of compressed, semi-solid flame. This acts as magical armour, drastically reducing incoming physical and magical damage. The mantle severely distorts your image, granting a high chance for ranged attacks to miss. Enemies who step within two metres of the mantle suffer immediate, severe burning damage.

A proper defensive skill that doubled as close-range area denial. It was perfect for when the enemy inevitably broke the frontline.

The system chimed again, a distinct, harmonious note.

[Skill Fusion Available!][The System has detected profound synergy between your passive skills 'Meditation' and 'Sage', alongside your new Primordial class.][Would you like to fuse these skills?]

Brett paused. Meditation was his main way to refill his mana quickly during downtime, and Sage made learning new intricacies of magic easier. He read the preview.

[Proposed Fusion: Hearthmind Trance]You achieve a perfect symbiosis with your element. While resting, your mind instinctively unravels the complex equations of fire magic, granting you a continuous, passive increase to your spell mastery and control. Furthermore, when meditating near an active heat source or fire, your mana regeneration rate is multiplied by 300%. The larger the external fire, the faster your core refills.

It was a brilliant fusion. He accepted it immediately. Another prompt dropped down.

[Skill Evolution Available: Mana Infusion]Manually infusing allies with raw mana is inefficient and dangerous given the new volatile nature of your core.[Skill Upgraded: Aura of the Hearth-Forge]Passive: You project a continuous, low-level aura of empowering heat. All designated allies within a fifteen-metre radius automatically have their physical weapons wreathed in a layer of magical flame. This adds moderate fire damage to all their physical attacks and strikes without draining your active mana pool. The effect scales slightly with your Wisdom stat.

Brett let out a breath of pure relief. He wouldn't have to waste time in combat individually buffing Josh or Bhel's weapons anymore—with the way they’d been fighting, he’d been forgetting to do it half the time. Now, just by standing near him, the party became deadlier.

Finally, a brilliant, glowing red prompt filled his vision.

[New Skill Unlocked: Call the Cinder-Sprite]Active: You mold a fraction of your primordial flame into a semi-sentient, minor fire elemental. The Cinder-Sprite is bound to your will. It cannot attack directly, but possesses two distinct functions:1. Passive - Hearth-Tether: The Sprite anchors itself to your shoulder, rapidly cycling and purifying ambient mana, effectively acting as an external mana battery that constantly feeds your core during combat.2. Active - Forge-Bellows: You can channel your spells directly through the Sprite. Doing so doubles the size, heat, and concussive force of the cast spell.Cost: Moderate Mana. Cooldown: 5 Minutes.

Hell yes.

Brett’s eyes snapped open in the real world.

The swirling vortex of crimson energy that had surrounded him suddenly sucked inward, absorbing directly into his skin. He breathed out, and a small, distinct puff of grey smoke slipped past his lips.

He felt entirely different. The world seemed colder, simply because his internal body temperature was running so incredibly high. He could feel the Scorched Veins in his arms, itching with the desire to release the pressure building in his core.

He looked up.

A few feet away stood Josh. His friend was a terrifying sight. His skin had taken on a dark, dense, greyish sheen, and a heavy, metallic resonance seemed to follow his every movement. He was leaning heavily on a broadsword, the steel blade sparking with brilliant, violent arcs of blue-white chain lightning that discharged into the cobblestones. He looked like an immovable, metal god. Has he got taller? Brett asked himself.

Josh met Brett’s eyes. The big man was smiling.

Brett pushed himself off the ground, feeling incredibly light on his feet. As he stood, he flexed his right hand. He didn't say a word. He didn't need to.

With a simple exertion of will, he activated his new skill.

The air above his right shoulder warped and superheated. With a soft crackle like a dry log catching in a fireplace, a small, floating orb of intensely bright, spinning orange fire popped into existence. It had no face, no distinct limbs, just two tiny, darker spots that gave the impression of eyes. It darted around Brett’s head once, leaving a trail of embers in its wake, before settling obediently on his shoulder, radiating a comforting, empowering heat directly into his newly forged mana channels.

Brett grinned, a wide, feral expression that matched the primal energy thrumming in his veins. The contrast between the two men was stark—the unbreakable, thunderous wall of metal, and the living, breathing inferno.

"I'm ready," Brett said, his voice carrying a slight, echoing rasp, like shifting coals.

Carcan chuckled from her place against the wall. "Two down," she muttered, her eyes drifting over to where Bhel was still entirely consumed by his own violent ascension. "Let's see what the others get," she added, seeing that the eyes of Bhel and Perberos were starting to flutter open.

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